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        <p>今天，有幸被欧阳老师要求，参与今日组内轮值的一个活动，关于写作手法的一些感悟，觉得挺有意思，写在今天的记录中，供大家参考</p>
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<p>说到写作手法，我的脑子一下子就回到了上学时候，什么排版、转折、类比，等等</p>
<p>也不知道有什么用，反正是知道，但很少认真的用过</p>
<p>我有经常有个疑惑，就是明明心里很清楚，但表达出来就变味了</p>
<p>有时候自己兴奋的不要不要的，但给别人说了，别人却反应冷淡，惊诧的看着自己</p>
<p>我想不仅我一个人是有这样的困惑，因为我经常也是上面所说的那个别人</p>
<p>有没有什么办法呢，一定是有的，因为办法总比困难多嘛</p>
<h2 id="转折">转折</h2>
<p>是一种表达方法，基本定义如下</p>
<blockquote>
<p>转折，表示某个事物的转变，变化。强调变化后的状态。</p>
<p>—— 百度百科</p>
</blockquote>
<p>看定义，没啥感觉</p>
<p>那就来个实例吧</p>
<blockquote>
<p>写作能力是什么？如何表达才能即明确，又令人印象深刻呢？</p>
</blockquote>
<p><img src="" alt="第一张图"></p>
<p>我自己来说的话，写作能力就是一种文字表达能力，或者是一种语言组织能力</p>
<p>然后再说的话，就是，写作能力很重要，很有必要，需要好好学习</p>
<p>这些苍白无力的话语</p>
<p>那么来看看这段文字</p>
<p><img src="" alt="1答案图"></p>
<blockquote>
<p>写作能力在自学能力中占据重要位置，<br>
这里提到的“写作能力”，<br>
不是写小说的能力，<br>
不是 写剧本 的能力，<br>
也不是 写散文 的能力，<br>
只是写作能力中最基本的一种写出<strong>简洁</strong>、<strong>有效</strong>、<strong>准确</strong>、<strong>朴素</strong>、<strong>具体的</strong>，<strong>说明性</strong>和<strong>说理性</strong>文章的 能力。</p>
<p>—— 把时间当作朋友</p>
</blockquote>
<p>感觉怎么样？是不是清晰很多？</p>
<p>这里使用的写作方式就是 “<strong>转折</strong>”</p>
<p>从人们对写作能力的普遍认识开始，一个一个的否定，不是……不是……也不是</p>
<p>然后一个转折，提出全新的定义，达到醒目的效果，然读者眼前一亮，感到哇奥，写作能力原来是这样的定义，于是就有了深刻的印象</p>
<h2 id="递进">递进</h2>
<p>啥是递进呢？</p>
<blockquote>
<p>按一定顺序推进，由浅入深</p>
<p>—— 百度百科</p>
</blockquote>
<p>由浅入深，有点意思，如何使用呢？</p>
<p><img src="" alt="2图"></p>
<p>这个问题还真不好回答，因为我们都知道健康很重要，重要到不言自明的状态，如果一定要说，也不免陈词滥调</p>
<p>那看看这段文字：</p>
<p><img src="" alt="2图"></p>
<blockquote>
<p>没有健康就没有办法做任何值得长期做的事情。<br>
但凡中途生病，但凡中途出意外，就必须中断原本就需要长期持续做的事情，那么，就会遇到功亏一篑的情况，更惨的，会出师未捷身先死<br>
比这一点更重要的是，你必须把锻炼变成一个日常不中断的习惯 —— 绝不要小瞧它的作用<br>
因为你可能并不知道的是，脑子这东西 永远“最先受身体的影响”，而不是你曾经误以为的那样，“先受知识的影响”</p>
<p>—— 微信互联网平民创业</p>
</blockquote>
<p>怎么样，是不是感受到了不一样的概念，原来健康不仅是身体上的，而且身体的健康才能让大脑更有效的工作</p>
<p>这段文字的写作方式是递进，从一个简单的，可以被大家接受的观点入手，说的健康对事业的重要性</p>
<p>然后一步更进一步，最后提出了大多数人没有意识到的概念</p>
<p>虽然只是一个基本观点，但在这样的文字表达中，显得更有力</p>
<h2 id="并列">并列</h2>
<p>同样，先看看定义</p>
<blockquote>
<p>并列：是指排名顺序，不分高下</p>
<p>—— 百度百科</p>
</blockquote>
<p>就是用一组不分先后顺序的语句，排列在一起，表达一种意思</p>
<p>刚才我们看了，写作能力是将事情清晰的表达出来的能力，而文学不过是一种文字应用的一种而已</p>
<p><img src="" alt="图三"></p>
<p>那么如何才能说明这，文学能力并不全是写作能力呢？</p>
<p>我们看看这段文字：</p>
<p><img src="" alt="图三"></p>
<blockquote>
<p>在我们的文化中，如果真少了一部《红楼梦》或者《西游记》，<br>
实际上并不会影响今天人们刷信用卡买东西、用互联网查资料、乘飞机出行、饿了吃饭、病了服药、困了睡觉。<br>
日本没有渡边淳一、大江健三郎，一样可以有索尼这种超级企业；<br>
美国没有梭罗和海明威，一样可以打赢第二次世界大战，成为超级大国；英语今天主宰全球的原因，并不是英国有莎士比亚、培根、狄更斯和 柯南道尔。</p>
<p>—— 微信互联网平民创业</p>
</blockquote>
<p>这段短小的文字，简直就是并列大派对</p>
<p>特别是 “用……用……用……” 这段，不仅是并列，而且有诗一般地韵律感</p>
<p>同样是应用最简单的写作方法，却能达到这样高的文字展示能力，可见作者的功力深厚</p>
<h2 id="总结">总结</h2>
<p>这篇文章的文字，均来自 <strong>李笑来</strong> 的作品，笑来老师总是用最朴实的语言，表达最有用的道理，自从参考了笑来老师的写作课，确实受益不少，这次又有幸成为第一期写作训练营的组长，通过践行将会更好的提高</p>
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<li><a href="https://github.com/xiaolai/time-as-a-friend" target="_blank" rel="noopener">https://github.com/xiaolai/time-as-a-friend</a></li>
<li><a href="https://github.com/xiaolai/everyones-guide-for-starting-up-on-wechat-network" target="_blank" rel="noopener">https://github.com/xiaolai/everyones-guide-for-starting-up-on-wechat-network</a></li>
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